Need your opinion on wording 4 baby shower invite

coasterqueen wrote: Okay, I'm getting ready to send out the invites for my friend's surprise baby shower. I'm not sure about the wording though, What do you think?

A baby girl
Will be showered this day
It's a surprise
Please don't give it away.
For:
Date:
Time:
Hosted by: Karen Nation
Location:

RSVP:
by July 6th

OR should it say....?

A mother and her baby girl
Will be showered this day
It's a surprise
Please don't give it away.

Jamison'smama replied: I think I like the second one---both are nice.

CantWait replied: I like the first one, gl

amynicole21 replied: I like the second one, but the cadence is a bit off... How about...

A Mother and her baby girl
Will be showered on this day
It will be a big surprise
So please don't give it away!

coasterqueen replied:
Oh Amy, I like that better! LOL! I got the saying off the internet, lol.

Boys r us replied: Both are really nice...I like the first one a tiny bit better!!

Jamison'smama replied:
Oh, that one is good!

A&A'smommy replied:
I like that one better, the other ones just didn't sound right to me

jem0622 replied: I definitely like both of them being recognized. Great suggestions!

kimberley replied: i liked the first one better until i read Amy's version. good luck with the shower!

coasterqueen replied: Thanks everyone! I'm going to go with Amy's suggestion! You all are so great, thanks .

P.S. Thanks Amy .

amynicole21 replied:
Glad all of that poetry analysis in English Lit actually paid off

Kaitlin'smom replied: guess I am late on this one, I like amy's suggestion best..... but I guessing it does nto matter now.

coasterqueen replied:
Of course your opinion matters . I'm actually not sending them til tomorrow morning because my friend doesn't have the list complete yet.

MommyToAshley replied: Well, if opinions still matter , then I also like Amy's version best too.

ediep replied:
me too

Kirstenmumof3 replied: I really like Amy's too, glad you're going with that one.

CantWait replied: haha yup I like the third one better